All Comments on 'Fire Pole'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Son,

Are you on drugs?

from the words of judge in My Cousin Vinny.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
I loved it

Well done, very well done. I like the firefighter references, the married man angst, the naughty girl waking everyone up at the station (LOL) and the hot sex. Excellent job! Sarahh

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
5 alarm

Still smiling. Hoping you will continue(greedy me)... seeing as they have all afternoon.

Awesome stuff!

nushu2nushu2almost 20 years ago
Great

Interesting background but what I really liked was the focus on the emotional, and sometimes intellectual side rather than the mechanical.

millennium_bardmillennium_bardover 19 years ago
A great story!

It has a well defined storyline that draws you in and won't let go intil the end.

Extremely well done!

ravenmxravenmxover 19 years ago
Great Story

Great story, I like how the girl woke up the whole house and then proceded to have sex after everyone went back to bed. Off to read the directed story at the end.

impressiveimpressiveover 19 years ago
Gotta love "sport fucking"

Don't know how I missed this one. What a stimulating way to start my day! ~Imp

Selena_KittSelena_Kittover 17 years ago
Mentioned

Your story has been mentioned in the Blast from the Past Story Reviews in the Author's Hangout.

jmcclendonjmcclendonabout 10 years ago
mmmmm love it!

Adore fire/ems personnel!

Well written and detail oriented. Very nice. Looking forward to reading your work frequently.<3

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